The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
There are 2 maps of small town called Islip that one of them is for now, and the others show the changes that will be executed in the Islip.
At first all the Islip is summarized in the main road and shops that are located in its environment. At the east side of town, we see a park and at the opposite of it, it is a school. As it is obvious from the first map there are long distance between school and the park that could take a lot time for transporting, as geographically they are near!
So in the 2nd map, that show the development of the town, it has been decided to create new road way between school and park that could decrease the traffic on the main road. Also, they change the last main road to pedestrian way, that make less busy in shop centers. And instead of that they make new road that goes on the top the town, I mean country side.
In the suggested map, there are more facilities related to the transportation. They planned precisely to make it more easily.
All the upward shops are gathered in the one center shopping, so bus station and an extra place for car parking has been created. Also, there are some extra places that had been used for expanding the town's houses.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32599118943 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28207439256 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533039647577 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.897655225 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22989088339 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927648241714 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712263605198 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13377653 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831151519606 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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