Mrs barret, an english speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
write a letter to mrs barret. in your letter
- suggest how you could help her in her home
- say why you would like to do this work
- explain when you will and will not be avalaible
Dear Mrs. Barrett,
Hello good morning madam, hope you will be always healthy and in good condition. My name is Arie Eko and I’m from Milan, today I saw an advertisement that looking for someone to help you in your home for a few days next summer. Firstly I’m so interested in that job and hopefully, I can get the opportunity. In this letter, I would like to suggest how I can help you in your home.
I graduated a few years ago from high school and I’m now a student at Milan University near your home and I’m learning about the hospitality and the cookery. More than that I have experience of cooking, where I can cook traditional menus very well and of course healthy for you. For household tasks, I can help you by cleaning every corner of the house, washing dishes, and much more. However, when I can cook and clean a home every day it makes me so happy. Furthermore, I can work and help you everyday in next summer from 07 am until 06 pm, It is because from 07 pm until 10 I have scheduled to study at University.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Thanks for your time.
Yours Faithfully,
Arie Eko
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y. Furthermore, I can work and help you everyday in next summer from 07 am until 06 pm, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34703196347 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42823648699 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2802469807 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313157021812 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118450608977 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102198590551 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218171573147 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841920132517 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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