In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that in the future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. In this essay, I strongly disagree with that statement. Because in this world there are so many amazing places that can be found and may be one of the dream places they want to visit in this life.
On the one hand, the main benefit of going on holiday to a different country in the future is they are people need a new experience about the holiday, it is because when they are want to explore another place in this world, they are must go out from their country and prepare for holiday wherever they want to go. Secondly, with holidays in a different country, they are can improve their language skills and knowledge about the culture. However especially on holiday in another place far away from home, they are getting a special experience which they will never forget. For example, when they want to know about the price for some food or ticket of transportation they need, they are just using a local language to communicate with local people. As result that moment it’s so memorable when they are visiting another place.
However, there are some drawbacks of going on holiday in their own country is they cannot get new experiences about the beautiful places that must be visited in their countries. Moreover, they know that other places in their own country are boring and unpleasant to visit because some places have high ticket prices and minimal maintenance. It is important that they are more experienced when visiting other places and get good memories.
To sum up, from where I stand, I believe that they are people who should go on vacation to other countries to get a lot of experience when they have time to vacation and get good memories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 438, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...skills and knowledge about the culture. However especially on holiday in another place ...
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Line 2, column 749, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...guage to communicate with local people. As result that moment it’s so memorable wh...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64353312303 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36318242073 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451104100946 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2118901438 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265431481143 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136990692603 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202747729004 0.0667982634062 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189430987311 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109221597661 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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