In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that, In the future, Local tourist attraction will be choosen by many poeple on their own country on holiday rather than overseas. In this essay, I complately agree with this statement for some reasons. Because it has more merit rather than demerit for some reason.
In the one hand, the main benefit of visiting local tourist attraction is to minimize the cost that they have to pay, it is because when they visit on local tourist attraction they just need to buy gass or buy bus ticket and it's cheaper than travel abroad. for example when me and my family went to bali, it just spent 2,5 million rupiah and we have enjoyed our holiday. went to the beach, swam, drank some coconut water and we have fun togather. as result, they can use another budget to buy new car, or for home renovation. It is clear that, visiting local tourist attraction can make beter in life and saving more money.
However, there are some drawbacks of travel overseas on holiday is to take a lot of time to get there. it is due to have work for their company or school for their children. Taken as an example my friend Dodi, who work on media and he has to work almost everyday by target, so he don't have many time on holiday may be just a few day and some time he has to taken over time due to his company's target. So that if they do not have much time on holiday they can not travel abroad. It is important that they should have enough leisure time to get travel overseas
To sum up, from where I stand, I believe that, visiting local tourist attraction is more effective than overseas. they do not have to pay much money and also don't need many time, But it will refresh your main and make your mood better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve to pay much money and also dont need many time, But it will refresh your main and make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10857623765 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509375 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4584947864 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164841987385 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654753278431 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600559126141 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103454719003 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047032301916 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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