Dear Peter,
Hope so all is going good with you! Last Saturday, you had throw a birthday party but i could not make it possible. Firstly i am sincerely apologizing for missing it, but next day on Sunday, i had to give my IELTS exam and i was preparing for it, whole day and night and after a day tomorrow, i had to go for documents verification.
You know very well, how much precious is you for me. But you are also aware of it that for the first time i had missed it. I do not want to make you sad on the special day of your life, so that is why i did not told you previously. Even i could not postponed it because the dates were already fixed. I know that were supposing me to be there with lots of surprises but i could not not make through it.
Next upcoming week, i am coming to your place and i have already planned a trip for both of us. The place where we are going, is a surprise for you, so for now you just start to wrap your clothes. Hope we would enjoy there and will give my full efforts to make this tour a mesmerizing dream for you.
Hope you will understand my problem. Please revert me back as soon as possible because i have to also make the further arrangements.
Your's friendly
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'thrown'.
Suggestion: thrown
...g good with you! Last Saturday, you had throw a birthday party but i could not make i...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thrown'.
Suggestion: thrown
...g good with you! Last Saturday, you had throw a birthday party but i could not make i...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...day, you had throw a birthday party but i could not make it possible. Firstly i a...
^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t i could not make it possible. Firstly i am sincerely apologizing for missing it...
^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for missing it, but next day on Sunday, i had to give my IELTS exam and i was pre...
^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Sunday, i had to give my IELTS exam and i was preparing for it, whole day and nig...
^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...day and night and after a day tomorrow, i had to go for documents verification. ...
^
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lso aware of it that for the first time i had missed it. I do not want to make yo...
^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pecial day of your life, so that is why i did not told you previously. Even i cou...
^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'tell'
Suggestion: tell
... of your life, so that is why i did not told you previously. Even i could not postpo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...why i did not told you previously. Even i could not postponed it because the date...
^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'postpone'
Suggestion: postpone
...t told you previously. Even i could not postponed it because the dates were already fixed...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[2]
Message: The verb suppose is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'supposed'
Suggestion: supposed
...e dates were already fixed. I know that were supposing me to be there with lots of surprises b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e dates were already fixed. I know that were supposing me to be there with lots of surprises b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to be there with lots of surprises but i could not not make through it. Next...
^
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: not
...here with lots of surprises but i could not not make through it. Next upcoming week...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ake through it. Next upcoming week, i am coming to your place and i have alre...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10878661088 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28139010548 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560669456067 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.867432328 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5384615385 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352372557646 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136787863444 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103403059486 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181603769613 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774581730042 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.