Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Some say that advertisement encourages us to buy things that we really do not need, while others argue that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Although this topic, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on it can lead to thought provoking discussion. I think that though advertisement is sometimes used to create false belief, it has more uses than problems.
Through advertisements, we get to know about the latest products available in market. We can compare these products and decide to buy the most suitable ones as per our needs. For example, if a family wants to buy a car, they can look at the various advertisements of various cars available in both print and electronic media across the internet. The family can judge the cars on the basis of budget, space, speed, etcetera, and make an informed choice and buy the most suitable car according to their requirements.
Without advertisements, it would be extremely difficult to make a judicial choice. Consumers would be left out of options and would make wrong decisions. Good products might be left behind for less appealing products due to lack of advertisement. Lack of advertisement will directly translate into lack of awareness and most of the people would not be aware about many products available for them in the market.
To conclude, I profoundly believe that the benefits of advertisements far outreach the disadvantages of it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 937.175257732 158% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18531468531 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16952400831 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 290.88556701 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8704398942 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28706353401 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878177381083 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165760964997 0.0603063233224 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147881918161 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130882913172 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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