Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

It is true that nowadays TV has become an essential part of life, medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. Unfortunately, people are giving more importance to television than their family and loved ones.

A man is a social animal. However, in today's fast moving world, people are more and more becoming secluded in their individual space due to television. Television provides entertainment and information and people do not feel the need to talk to their kins after watching it. The Television has filled a void in people's life and people are so satisfied after watching it that they do not feel like doing anything after watching television.

The work gets affected when people spent too much time on television, the eyesight gets weakened due to too much television viewing, and the recent studies have found out that the back and neck ache is common amoungst the people who regularly watch television. Children who develop the habit of continuously watching television are not able to concentrate much on their school education. It impacts their brain for their entire life.

Therefore, to conclude, it can be said that while the television is a medium of imparting entertainment, news and knowledge, it should be viewed in limited and controlled way. The people who go to the extent of making television their companion suffer through mental depression and social solitude.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09012875536 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80409622835 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583690987124 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9651413891 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167030429297 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857859167443 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200571832571 0.071462118173 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149663397391 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191729212661 0.0609392437508 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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