Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed , films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed , films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the advent of technology ,we can enjoy the movies on small screen at our own convenient time and in cozy environment rather than going to movie theatre. While some people opine that it is more rejoicing when we watch movie in a theatre. I would like to endorse my view that watching movie at home along with family is more joyful, convenient and economical at the same time.
Many people are busy earning livelihood and hardly get time to devote long hours on entertainment and rejuvenating activities. It is very exhausting in their hectic schedule to watch movie in cinema.In addition going out with family to cinema is quite exorbitant. It is very feasible to watch your favourite movie in cell phone in no time. There are plethora of options available online. We can watch the movie at our convenient time and place with family and friends.
Undoubtedly, its very joyful to enjoy the movie in theatre. It is all together a lively experience to go to the theatre with the group as we share many euphoric moments. Moreover, movies are more enjoyable on large screen with dolby sound and excellent picture quality with larger audience.
Once, I enjoyed a patriotic movie with my family in a theatre. Theatre was fully packed and it was a block buster movie and certain dialogues and scenes were appreciated by each and every present over there. It was laud applauded and hooting that created a patriotic environment which one misses at home. It was completely a thrilling experience of my life.
In conclusion, although it is blissful to watch movie with a group in theatre. It is quite inexpensive and comfortable to watch movie over cell phone and tablets any time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
...rience. With the advent of technology ,we can enjoy the movies on small screen ...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent rather than going to movie theatre. While some people opine that it is more rejoi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nating activities. It is very exhausting in their hectic schedule to watch movie ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ectic schedule to watch movie in cinema.In addition going out with family to cinem...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ic schedule to watch movie in cinema.In addition going out with family to cinema is quit...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t picture quality with larger audience. Once, I enjoyed a patriotic movie with my f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce. Once, I enjoyed a patriotic movie with my family in a theatre. Theatre was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 5.05154639175 376% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 937.175257732 179% => OK
No of words: 353.0 206.0 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74220963173 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56368966689 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507082152975 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 290.88556701 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1920963244 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7142857143 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315028194295 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10827200315 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162959881687 0.0603063233224 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196192046634 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.224312353809 0.0580467560999 386% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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