The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbors Write a letter to the local council In your letter 1 describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pr

Essay topics:

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors.

Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1. describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly.
2. explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors3.suggest what should be done about the problem.

write atleast 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to let you know that the system for the collection of garbage in in our local area is not working properly nowadays, as the waste collection vehicle has not come for the past one week, thereby a delay has experienced in the collection of garbage.

Let me explain the problem in detail. The rubbish which was collected and deposited in a place which is nearby main road were not removed on time which made a foul smell in the region. Moreover, this leads to rapid increase of flies and mosquitoes which can further cause diseases. Me and my neighbors cannot be stepped down from our houses due to the bad smell which is coming from the garbage.

Would you kindly help me in arranging a garbage vehicle to collect and dump wastes on a regular basis? It would be really helpful if you could regularly monitor the garbage collection in our area as this is happening the third time. Waiting in anticipation for your reply.

Thank you for your consideration and abetment.
Yours faithfully,
Sherin

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...he system for the collection of garbage in in our local area is not working properly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, third, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51498345461 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2053189608 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373031499483 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127728113067 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102623182193 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217282013793 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114750619047 0.0580467560999 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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