You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with
your hotel room.
Write to the hotel manager. In your letter…
- Tell the manager about the problems you had
- Explain to them how you feel about what happened
- Let them know what actions you would like them to take.
Dear Sir,
I would like to complain about some issues I had with your hotel last week. As a result of
these problems I was unable to enjoy my stay at your hotel and so I am writing to share
them with you.
Firstly, I was looking forward to make use of your hotel facilities such as swimming pool and
gym during my stay. However, on checking into the hotel I was told that all facilities are
currently being upgraded and so were not open to guests. I felt very disappointed as that
was the main attraction for booking your hotel. I think you should make it clear on your
bookings website when certain activities are unavailable in the hotel.
Secondly, the room was very hot and stuffy, and the air conditioned system was not working
properly. I was very frustrated because I was not able to get a proper night’s sleep. In future,
I suggest you should carry out a full room check before allowing guests to use it.
All in all, I was very unhappy with my stay. If you could offer me a refund or something else
by way of compensation, that would be much appreciated.
Yours,
John Johnson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 87, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...not able to get a proper night’s sleep. In future, I suggest you should carry out a full...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50495049505 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48195131799 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2612467614 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2976351366 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100885613862 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792182211604 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926798358632 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732777375539 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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