You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
1. describe the problem with the equipment
2. explain how this problem is affecting your work
3.say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that the laptop which I bought from your shop last week has stopped working since yesterday. The display has completely gone and not showing anything on the screen; however, audio is working properly.
Let me explain my situation in detail. I am working from home and my current job completely relies on the laptop, as it contains all the relevant documents and softwares which were installed in that recently. Unfortunately, I forgot to keep a copy of some important office-related files from my laptop. I am in a dilemma as I cannot resume my pending works without the laptop. If this gets delayed, it may definitely affect my job stability.
Would you kindly help me in fixing this issue either by changing the display panel or replace it with a new one? It would be a great help for me if you could make this as early as possible. Waiting in anticipation for your reply.
Thank you for your consideration and abetment.
Yours faithfully,
Sherin
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7808988764 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73830736613 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0652136674 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241792623286 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863958305771 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064368118453 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157113165346 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527536245224 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.