Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Films play a pivotal role in entertaining people these days. Most people believe that watching films in the theatres are much better when in comparison with phones and tablets, while others prefer to enjoy films on their devices at home. In my opinion, watching films in theatre gives you an immense satisfaction and joyful experience which cannot be achieved when in devices.
Many people enjoy being in a cinema hall because of the ambience and sound effects that they experience. One would never get that in phones or tablets because the speakers and amplifiers in a cinema hall are expensive and are not affordable. For instance, people would never watch an action movie on their devices as the impact of it would not be much effective. Furthermore, horror movies would make no enthusiasm for those who watch it in devices. Another important reason for people to depend cinema is the continuity that they are getting which is near to impossible while sitting at other places. For example, a person often gets distracted by phone calls or messages while watching films on their devices. Majority of people love to be in cinema hall due to the above-mentioned reasons.
Some people, on the other hand, think watching movies on their phones or tablets are more comfortable. The main reason behind that this is cost-effective. For instance, a regular viewer of films could save a huge amount of money if he opts to watch it on his device. Another reason is the coziness one would get while sitting at their home with their devices. It is definitely comfortable for people who don't like to go outside often. Watching films on phones or tablets is unavoidable for some people who likely to spend less money.
To encapsulate, most people enjoy watching movies in theatres, while there are people who also enjoy them playing on their devices. In my opinion, being in a cinema hall gives you an enormous amount of visual effects which a device can never offer. Despite of the fact that there are few merits watching movies on phone, but the advantages that a theatre provides outweighs it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s definitely comfortable for people who dont like to go outside often. Watching film...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88764044944 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55380801191 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483146067416 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.506799569 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5789473684 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240305374167 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855030870382 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519161198714 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165439641875 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336988496149 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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