There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe the importance of the park
say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing on behalf of all the residents of Fairview colony about city park council’s recent decision to sell City Park to a local construction company to build a shopping complex.
Let me introduce myself, my name is Alex Barns and I have been living in the Fairview Colony for almost 8 years. I moved into this locality because of its serenity and calmness. By profession, I am an environmental scientist working for Mississauga Research Centre.
This park has a great amount of significance in my and other residents’ lives. People, including myself, come to the park to spend some time near mother nature; performing activities such as Yoga, jogging and running. As you are selling this place, these residents would be deprived of a place to relax as well as rejuvenate themselves. Such a decision will bring a detrimental affect people’s mental and physical health.
If the park council is reluctant to reconsider their decision, we all will protest against it. In addition, we might consider bringing this scenario to the court that would harm your reputation, which is something you do not want to happen.
I request you once again to change your present decision, or it is going to arouse a feeling of resentment and remorse among society members.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09132420091 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85230641478 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684931506849 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5618972141 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9166666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294869050883 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831421668243 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049468583078 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138041693737 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052418134401 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.