There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe the importance of the park
say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
I am writing to bring your attention towards the unlawful approach of selling a shared park near my community.
My name is John Smith, a resident of Vaughan, living here for more than 6 years. I live in a condo which consists of 21 floors and includes underground parking, mainly occupied by families and students. In fact, near our dwelling, we have a beautiful garden named “Heart lake Park “where all the society members go to relax. Moreover, this park is of utmost importance for both kids and adults as everyone goes there to play games such as Badminton, Tennis, Soccer, Cricket, and mini-parties, get-together, respectively. However, this comfort and happiness seem to be disappearing soon, owing to our Local council, who is trying to sell this park for the new development plan. Furthermore, we were not even given any type of notice about this upcoming plan.
Being so close to this park and the greenery, me and other colony members are going to start a campaign against this illegal work, and we would like to feature about this activity in your newspaper “Times of Vaughan”, so that all the reader could also join this protest, which is starting the day after tomorrow on 23rd July at 11:00 pm. I would really appreciate it if you could help us save our local park.
I will look forward to hearing back from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours Faithfully
John Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...beautiful garden named “Heart lake Park “where all the society members go to rela...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8375 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65844762032 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7805925469 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.545454545 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287936981586 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955940575472 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063650917945 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156600930865 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220372471315 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.