A while ago you had lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it?
Why do you need it back?
What should he/she do about it?
Dear Matt,
Hope you had an amazing holiday in Australia. I am really eager to see your holiday pictures. By the way, now that the holiday is over, I think you no longer need the suitcase you borrowed from me.
If you remember, you took my black colour full size “Samsonite” suitcase last month as one of the wheels of your suitcase had come out and you needed one urgently for your trip.
The reason why I need my suitcase is that I’ve decided to go to Alberta in Canada to attend my brother’s convocation ceremony. Besides that, I would be visiting my aunt in New York. It would be a three week’s trip. Therefore, I need my suitcase because that is the only one I have of that huge size. As you know I prefer not to carry much luggage so I am planning to pack everything in that big suitcase. If you are free this weekend, you could visit my place and bring the suitcase with you.
We can watch a movie and also see pictures of your Australia trip. If you can’t make it then I will come and pick up the suitcase because I want to start my packing from next week onwards.
Let me know about your plan as soon as possible so that I can make necessary arrangements.
Best Wishes,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: CD_WEEK_S[1]
Message: The apostrophe is probably in the wrong place here. Did you mean 'three weeks' trip'?
Suggestion: three weeks' trip
...ting my aunt in New York. It would be a three week’s trip. Therefore, I need my suitcase because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, really, so, then, therefore, i think, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34955752212 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42371674307 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.049048134 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6153846154 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169581510104 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566368365026 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583913708463 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941223868888 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502178215891 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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