Write a letter to the admissions tutor explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the admissions tutor:

explain your position
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am John, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to seek sincere apology from you as it would be pragmatically impossible for me to attend the interview as scheduled by you on 5th of April at 11:00 p.m.As I have a litigation pending with Income Tax Department, sadly they have fixed the same day for hearing thus it would not possible for me to present before you for the interview.

I really feel sorry from the bottom of my heart, sometimes situation are beyond our control. I hope this would be my last hearing of legal dispute with Income Tax authorities, hence I cannot take the risk of postponing the date with authorities. It would be highly appreciable if you would reschedule the interview on very next working day or same day on later hours.

It would be very grateful if you apprise me with the duration of interview and whether it would include any kind of test.

I am anticipating a positive response from your side.

Yours sincerely,
JOhn

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to seek sinc...
^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...led by you on 5th of April at 11:00 p.m.As I have a litigation pending with Income...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, thus, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70391061453 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62548436071 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.632116003 44.8134815571 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169090616663 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855736749119 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669176874639 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107100130093 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331740715531 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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