Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Undoubtedly, children are the tender buds of society and how they should be looked after from medical viewpoint has always been the burning issue. In current scenario, real delimma is whether the decision of immunising the children should be left in the hands of parents or it should be made compulsory according to legislation. However, this essay
adamantly support the former statement as the ignorant attitude of parents and financial constraints are accountable for such steps.
Even though the individuals of this ever-progressing world are exceptional talented, unfortunately they lack that social responsibilities towards their kith and kins. Seemingly, they are strucked in never ending materialistic race in order to earn success and monetary resources by hook and crook. Meanwhile, the precious treasure like health of offsrings skip through guardian minds owing to which life threatening disorders take place in long run. It would be biased to overlook the data published by UNESCO stating that around 46% youngsters across the globe are inflicting with fatal ailments due to the
negligent behaviour of care takers.
Another justifiable reason for this stand is that for underprivileged populace such antitodes are too dear to afford. This is because destitute people have hardly access to the fundamental necessities of life and in untoward circumstances how they can bestow their babies necessary health associated ameneties. Therefore, making these treatments inevitable for the citizens would be an impeccable option. To exemplify, in India Polio Drops are necessary for every child up to the age of four years to
compensate the deficiency of prerequisite nutrients in body, due to absence of which make children suffer permanent disability.
To conclude, the advancement in medical field has invented the ample protective measures such as vaccines to ensure the protection of toddlers. Undeniably, it is the accountability of administrations to implement stringent laws in order to constitutea wealthy nation because a country flourishes with healthy natives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64873417722 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12698422825 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9399051231 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.307692308 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191587908977 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560305288305 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798055556165 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677192241105 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895780753494 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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