Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following:
Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
when and where you hired the car
describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am writing in express to sincerely apologize for the situation I met with during my vacation. I had lease a car from the management for a couple of weeks but unfortunately , it caused damage to the company property due to the accident occurred while my trip.
To be more specific, On the last day of weekday in the office on 27 August I signed a writing , with consents of the team management of leasing the vehicle of the company until 15 September. Besides, the terms and conditions of gas, any repair and cost of damage was slightly on me with written agreement.
Unluckily, when we were arriving back on the way a gigantic truck was unable to made a wide turn and ultimately hit an angle of its back upon the car. Simultaneously, I was unable to had contact with truck driver as I was in his blind spot. Although, the truck driver can see but his vision was glared by the sunshine. As a result, the collision occurred between both party. Blissfully, we got only minor injuries during the major shock but the car was tore out as well as tires were also blown at the same time. Likewise, there are many scratches on the body of the car. So, we called the police meanwhile the ambulance rushed spontaneously.
At last, the truck driver agreed that was his mistake as well as I had also made a mistake so we both partially agreed for the cause of the loss. The car was pulled away right away to the car agency for the maintenance and all the cost was incurred by the truck driver.
I feel sincere apology again for the damage of the property of the company.
Yours faithfully,
Jasmine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... for a couple of weeks but unfortunately , it caused damage to the company propert...
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Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e office on 27 August I signed a writing , with consents of the team management of...
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Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... when we were arriving back on the way a gigantic truck was unable to made a wide...
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Line 13, column 456, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'torn'.
Suggestion: torn
... during the major shock but the car was tore out as well as tires were also blown at...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, so, well, while, as to, i feel, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5472972973 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54878971165 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6877866964 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960802635276 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317042888666 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314903918252 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505076468191 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276882116237 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.