Write a letter to a friend.you have borrowed something from and it get damaged.1) Apologize for damaging the product2) Explain what happened3) Say how are you hoing to fix the issues.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an, So sorry that its been long that i write you, but at last I am writing to ...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you, but at last I am writing to explain why i have not return your hard drive. ...
^^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ling guilty. I just have to own up that i damaged the hard drive accidentally. Im...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... i damaged the hard drive accidentally. Im so sorry because i know how important ...
^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... damaged the hard drive accidentally. Im so sorry because i know how important th...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rive accidentally. Im so sorry because i know how important the hard drive is to...
^
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ur late Uncle. What happened is that i was coping some document from the hard ...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...i was coping some document from the hard , While copying the hard drive mistakenly...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...hard drive. I have given it to our I.T personnel to please help check and fix ...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to please help check and fix any issues that might occur. Anyway it should be as...
^^
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Anyway it should be as good as new when i get it back next week and then Ill send...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...w when i get it back next week and then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry ...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...and then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry for any inconvenience it might...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09580838323 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07662184247 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0256313089 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219741129696 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081311765413 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508622424549 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125694339702 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395233725992 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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