Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently.In your letter, you should: explain the content of letter why you need translated report why do you need it urgently

Essay topics:

Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently.

In your letter, you should:

explain the content of letter

why you need translated report

why do you need it urgently

Dear translator,

I wonder if prompt translation service is available which should be done by tomorrow morning. The contents is mainly about financial status for my company, and it is approximately 10 pages including graph and diagrams.

As some of our departments are located in South Korea, the report should have included the profit from that area. However, a junior accountant sent incorrect financial statement to korean tax service by mistake. In order to fix the issue, they required to send translated report with your assigned company stamp.

The deadline is tomorrow 12 PM, so I need to have korean version of report before that time. In case the submission is fail, it leads to loss of clients. Because we are planning to expand our business next quarter, this kind of failure cannot be accepted. please let me know if you are able to do this, and please let me know if you have any question regard to this work. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

regards,

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... done by tomorrow morning. The contents is mainly about financial status for my co...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt with your assigned company stamp. The deadline is tomorrow 12 PM, so I nee...
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Line 13, column 258, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...his kind of failure cannot be accepted. please let me know if you are able to do this,...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...oking forward to hearing from you. regards,
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92899408284 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57613320866 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698224852071 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8467301672 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211295977173 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648811469284 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045445613907 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12190778476 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116066364104 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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