You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements.
1. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving.
2. What type of rooms you would like.
3. Ask them how much the weekend will cost.
4. Also, enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear hotel manager,
I am wondering if there is any available room on next Saturday. also, when is the earliest check in time? we expect to arrive at the airport approximately at 9 am, so I want to avoid sitting at lobby for another couple of hours. In addition to that, I have heard your hotel offers a ride to airport. we are leaving at 10AM on Sunday. if I do not need to book a taxi, that would be convenient.
Besides that, what I am looking for is a room can enjoy the view of sea. I also prefer top floor so that there is no obstacle to see wonderful view. For room size, anything bigger than two bed rooms would be suitable for our whole family.
By the way, the website only show weekdays price. I am pretty sure there is a difference from weekdays and weekend room price. my budget is quite tight, so cost information would help me to make my plan.
if the explained room is not available, please let me know so that I can arrange another room.
Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also
...is any available room on next Saturday. also, when is the earliest check in time? we...
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Suggestion: We
...so, when is the earliest check in time? we expect to arrive at the airport approxi...
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Suggestion: We
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Suggestion: If
...port. we are leaving at 10AM on Sunday. if I do not need to book a taxi, that woul...
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Suggestion: My
...e from weekdays and weekend room price. my budget is quite tight, so cost informat...
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Suggestion: If
...ation would help me to make my plan. if the explained room is not available, pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33513513514 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36686401987 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8325522837 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.6923076923 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17156835518 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544040612675 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283488932449 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910781491325 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207680639651 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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