A motorway is to be built near your house. As you think that is will destroy areas of natural beauty. Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter
• Express your views
• Explain what damage will be caused
• Suggest alternative routes
Dear who may concern,
I am writing this letter to stop building a motorway near my house for some reasons.
To begin with, various animals live in the mountain right besides of the planned motorway such as deer, rabbit and even rare types of birds. The problem is that, according to recent research, those animals are not the ones can adapt to changed environment easily. Therefore, it is highly possible that the considerable amount of animal would be decreased with the new road.
Moreover, the increased traffic would have negative impacts on residents' health. Many people decided to live this area because of the fresh and clean air. More gas emission from the vehicles would definitely affect the quality of the air, and it will hinder their well-being life in countryside.
Of course, I get the necessity of more roads. What I can suggest is to use another route which is near Hamton area as it was mainly used for storage purpose. Also, it has lower density compared to my house area, so it would be better place to build.
I hope you consider my suggestion and I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, of course, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96923076923 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41951304863 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702564102564 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7718296571 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 4.34317383033 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154479618332 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473939782855 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387067007762 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682457923096 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421586866246 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.