Write a letter to your local library suggesting something they could do to improve their facility. In your letter include: • a recount of a poor experience you had • what you feel the library should change • why you feel the library needs alteration
Begin your letter with
Dear……,
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am one of the frequent readers who cares a lot about the library and the great services that it provides to our community. Allow me to elaborate on why I am writing to you this letter.
I have been visiting the library since 2014, and I am used to finishing all my research using the library’s facilities such as books, documents and computers. Recently, there are some issues regarding these facilities that need quick intervention. Firstly, the central ventilation system needs to be improved due to high humidity during summer days. Secondly, although it is quite satisfying, the Internet speed has to be upgraded to cope with the increasing number of users.
since the library is one of the oldest places in the city, which service all categories of people, I am entitled to request a kind respond from your side as this will help maintain the library in an excellent condition.
Yours faithfully,
Randa Agha.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear……, Dear Sir/ Madam, I am one of the freq...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear……, Dear Sir/ Madam, I am one of the frequent readers who car...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ring summer days. Secondly, although it is quite satisfying, the Internet speed has to be upgraded...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...condly, although it is quite satisfying, the Internet speed has to be upgraded to...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
... with the increasing number of users. since the library is one of the oldest places...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, regarding, second, secondly, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8072198001 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.175032794 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157829792311 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643405101174 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668102609181 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100651367073 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460259204886 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.