You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter-Give details of your visit to the restaurant-Explain the reason fo

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
- Give details of your visit to the restaurant
- Explain the reason for the celebration
- Say what was good about the food and service

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you to express my delight with your restaurant and service. With this letter I would like to deliver my impressions concerning the professional services of your staff and your menu.

Last Saturday I, my close relatives and friends celebrated my 30th birthday in your restaurant. We were 20. As I heard a lot of excellent reviews about your restaurant, I decided to meet all them there. It was the most wonderful evening in my life.

All of us enjoyed the evening. Your staff professionally provided us with the seating arrangements without any encroach to other visitors. They served with experienced etiquette and showed us their trained abilities. I ordered rack of pork ribs and it was deliciously succulent.
Everything was paramount. All of us enjoy the live music, your design, serving and unbelievable meals.
Thank you for our impressions and for the best birthday evening in my life.
You faithfully,
Mehriban

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g in my life. You faithfully, Mehriban
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['if']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237288135593 0.220444632235 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.124293785311 0.167888034529 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0734463276836 0.0606518309736 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0282485875706 0.0506257000042 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.186440677966 0.118615021944 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0960451977401 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0225988700565 0.041066498444 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96175482915 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225988700565 0.0385302599488 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0677966101695 0.0714148451538 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00564971751412 0.0191574576366 29% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 963.0 1141.60824742 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.134020619 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09493670886 5.53046319177 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348101265823 0.284621296913 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303797468354 0.211203875043 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20253164557 0.133321485273 152% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145569620253 0.0843313296314 173% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96175482915 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.7833609422 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 11.2857142857 16.4300151701 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0723541987 44.7399317507 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7857142857 90.9928171075 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2857142857 16.4300151701 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0714285714286 0.613754768223 12% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 41.6654611212 37.5504026743 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.05 1.13073093955 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438418317355 0.331212695627 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0827853520056 0.0927372745006 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696523520069 0.0736520305886 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552874874097 0.579516596996 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.220341494873 0.180689518051 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138127764386 0.122183219658 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817942295701 0.0765303033291 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183666237405 0.211926503985 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0841460367133 0.0737400523855 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247180773705 0.203819188451 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921676306349 0.067151250289 137% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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