Government should spend money on railways rather than roads
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days we heard various problems concerning the transportation. (Road accidents, crowded buses with people, road traffic jams) So each of us think that government should control and stabilize these kind of problems by allocating funds on railway system than on road transportation system. In next paragraphs I will express my opinion and ideas concerning this issue.
Firstly I think railway system is more safety than road transport vehicles. Nowadays, there are lots of road accidents and road casualties which are caused becouse of exceeding of speed. We watch mostly the road accident casualties on everyday TV news, than railway accident.
Secondly railway trains are more comfortable and usable for traders than road vehicles. Railway trains can carry far more trade products, than shuttle buses. It is less expencive and more safety than delivery the products by using buses or other road transportation. Besides, the railway trains can carry the trade products along with people, but buses can not.
And thirdly improving the railway system can lead to solve problems with trafic jam. In most countries the railway system is constructed away from roads and thus, can reduce the the traffic problems. As the rail lines are away from roads people wait the transport in railway stations and as the result there are less buses and cars on roads than it were.
Finally the population of our world is increasing rapidly, that is why investing more money on faster and safer transportation system is more required. In my opinion allocating funds to this system would not be wasting of money and time, it would be useful for both, for government and for citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...government should control and stabilize these kind of problems by allocating funds on rail...
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...ransportation system. In next paragraphs I will express my opinion and ideas conc...
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...ccident casualties on everyday TV news, than railway accident. Secondly railway tra...
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...lway trains can carry the trade products along with people, but buses can not. A...
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...ed away from roads and thus, can reduce the the traffic problems. As the rail lines are...
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...ed away from roads and thus, can reduce the the traffic problems. As the rail lines are...
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...ay stations and as the result there are less buses and cars on roads than it were. ...
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... buses and cars on roads than it were. Finally the population of our world is increasi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'i think', 'kind of', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.324414715719 0.247107183377 131% => OK
Verbs: 0.133779264214 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0602006688963 0.0946595960268 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056856187291 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0367892976589 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137123745819 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0367892976589 0.0403226058552 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61713857523 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0066889632107 0.0326793684256 20% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.066889632107 0.0861772015684 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0301003344482 0.021408717616 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0066889632107 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1669.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11355311355 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358974358974 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271062271062 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172161172161 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128205128205 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61713857523 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.4157506511 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1460272147 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.3062271062 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.19117647059 1.69124875643 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918790365777 0.332605444948 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135727095261 0.102741220458 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0930516412522 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584560909122 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127089751073 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380646014615 0.134430193775 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279484170989 0.0742795772207 38% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254259511547 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0474304326708 0.0638462369009 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608791774287 0.228012699653 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249868821898 0.058150111329 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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