You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:Give details of your visit to the restaurantExplain the reason f

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

Give details of your visit to the restaurant
Explain the reason for the celebration
Say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir,

I am writing you to express my delight over my recent visit, last Sunday, to your elegant restaurant. I can still recall the quality time that I had on my 28th birthday occasion.

I heard so much good about your establishment; therefore I decided to celebrate my birthday in this fancy restaurant. I was accompanied by my, dear friends, work colleagues, and to my surprise the staff was too smooth, and well experienced to provide us desired seating arrangements in a separate hall, in no time.

The menu itself was impressive, as a huge variety of distinctive cuisine were on the list. I ordered a tempting rack of sheep ribs with humus. Though, I couldn’t finish it all, but my admiration for its paramount taste is merely a just. Other than that, waiters were at our service throughout our stay, and specially! I was most touched by the graceful act of your assistant manager who presented us complimentary refreshments at the end, for my birthday.

Thank you for the exceptional service, and wish you all the luck.

Sincerely yours,

Irfan Ullah

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I had on my 28th birthday occasion. I heard so much good about your establish...
^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e my birthday in this fancy restaurant. I was accompanied by my, dear friends, wo...
^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ation for its paramount taste is merely a just. Other than that, waiters were at our s...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, therefore, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95883348157 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710382513661 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9020210537 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138177202589 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512138105284 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049575690256 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942906848955 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039530435196 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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