You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Writs a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for your excellent food and service which was provided to us when we had a great time at your restaurant.
Let me explain my visit briefly. Last week, I along with my close friends had walked-in at your restaurant to celebrate the happiest moment of my friend's life. Specifically, It was Friday evening of 3 October.
Actually, David, who recently got his first job as a Business Analyst in the Microsoft company wanted to celebrate his success with friends. Therefore, we planned to spend sometime at your place, which is one of the famous and fascinating eating place.
Remarkably, the chicken wings and Korean food that we ordered on that evening was definitely delicious and perfectly dressed. Apart from this, the seating arrangement which was perfectly organised by your staff, was very pleasing and importantly, the waiters served all the food items on time which made our celebration even more memorable.
I would like to appreciate your hospitality and hope you have even more success in your business in the coming years.
Yours sincerely,
Kawaljit Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... was perfectly organised by your staff, was very pleasing and importantly, the waiters served all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, briefly, first, if, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10215053763 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70835968129 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7584696645 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254845784151 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887132737787 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064359560306 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133695018982 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442471322253 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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