Your friend has just won a siseable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it.
Write a letter to your friend.In your letter
1. congratulate him\her on their win
2. give practical advice on how to spend the money
3. advice him\her on benefits\drawbacks associated with large wins
Dear Dave,
I felt very glad when I came to know that you are the lottery winner of this year and hope you 'll be on cloud nine after having a winning amount. I think this money has come to you at the perfect stage of the life and it 'll definitely help in building your professional career.
Let me explain in more detail. As you had already been interested in pursuing your master degree from the reputed university, but due to the financial constraints, you were unable to fulfill your passion. Fortunately, life has bestowed a golden opportunity to fulfill this ambition. So, I 'll truly urge you to spend money wisely on the education which would help in making your successful professional career.
As a close friend, I 'ld like to remind you having money is a good thing, but using it efficiently is equally important. So, don't get over-excited and try to use this amount for the betterment of life rather than spending money vaguely. This win can shift your life completely in a positive direction. However, try to remain focused towards career and avoid spending on the luxury items just only for the sake of social status.
I hope you 'll consider my suggestions in a positive way.
Happy wishes for your future life.
Kawal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wisely on the education which would help in making your successful professional c...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[3]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to have'.
Suggestion: to have
...a close friend, I ld like to remind you having money is a good thing, but using it eff...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t efficiently is equally important. So, dont get over-excited and try to use this am...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... I hope you ll consider my suggestions in a positive way. Happy wishes for your future life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70776255708 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60751784439 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3869168618 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174421359009 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065747329245 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505335208679 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095580272141 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056723337552 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.