Shopping has become a popular activity. Discuss its positive and negative effects.
It is true that the trend of shopping has been increasing rapidly day by day. While some folks believe that shopping is an activity which fascinates them, others think it hardly brings any benefits.
Currently, shopping in the malls has been considered as a stylish and enjoyable thing among the youngsters and prudent activity for adults. Although buying items is an expensive task when inflation rate is quite high but still buying a modern branded clothes and gadgets is a very common trend among the younger generation. Young lads prefer to buy fancy clothes, mobiles and accessories whereas young lasses shows more interest towards the cosmetics and stylish dresses which all together helps the youngsters to feel more self-esteemed, motivated and confident. Family protagonists usually tends to make proper usage of listed discounts and attractive offers for purchasing the domestic households. For example, easy installment schemes foster the customers to do more shopping such as buying a Television, Refrigerator, which have common uses in the daily life.
However, shopping sometime brings negative effects. People often carried away by the provocative advertisements, which mainly results into purchasing of unnecessary items and thus, puts undue financial burden on folks. If the kids have been extravagant and usually spends money on luxury items just only for the sake of social status, then it would be a problem for them at an adult age because they would be addictive to waste spending and eventually ends in less saving for family.
In conclusion, shopping has almost become an unavoidable activity and definitely , it comprises of benefits if people manage shopping wisely.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4022556391 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77697613592 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665413533835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3774868988 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103535841603 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539383324524 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774881750554 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076824821024 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425402637332 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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