Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter congratulate him/her on their win
Give practical advice on how to spend the money
advise him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins
Dear Danny,
Hope you are in the pink of your health. Its been so long since we last met. it was glad to hear that you won such a good-sized prize money and you must be on cloud nine after winning such a huge prize money. Heartiest congratulations to you on such a brilliant success. I think this money has come to you on a perfect time as you were planning to go for higher studies from a reputed college, but could not go due to financial constraints. Now, with this money you can plan to continue your studies and can grow professionally and personally as well.
As a good friend, I would also like to suggest you invest some amount with a bank with high percentage returns which can be saved for the future. It is not at all safe to keep such a big amount of money with you. Having money is good and using it efficiently is equally important so do not get carried away with it. It can be used for the betterment of you and your family.
I hope you will consider my suggestions in a good way.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Cheers
Nikita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...th. Its been so long since we last met. it was glad to hear that you won such a go...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge prize money'.
Suggestion: huge prize money
...ust be on cloud nine after winning such a huge prize money. Heartiest congratulations to you on su...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Heartiest'.
Suggestion: The Heartiest
... after winning such a huge prize money. Heartiest congratulations to you on such a brilli...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24875621891 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43606394911 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5927431161 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110421630319 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439841724115 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383025302535 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510014090262 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513456492265 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.