You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:give details of your visit to the restaurantexplain the reason f

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Manager,

I am writing to you for expressing my gratitude and thanks for facilitating me and my friends to celebrate a birthday party at your restaurant last Friday. The experience was awesome and we all enjoyed each and every moment spend at your place.

As a part of celebrating my brother's birthday, me and my friends were looking for an affordable but spectacular hangout place and that's how we landed up at your place. Your restaurant surpassed all our expectations and offered us a very courteous service as well as an excellent spread of food.

Further to that, I must admit that service offered by your staff members were exemplary. The staff members were very helpful and provided us the right advises in selecting the food. Food served was not only tasty but also much economical. In this regard, I would like to place my sincere thanks for hosting us and turning the event to be an ever memorable one. Hope to meet you all again soon.

Warm regards,

Aby George

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...dable but spectacular hangout place and thats how we landed up at your place. Your re...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ell as an excellent spread of food. Further to that, I must admit that service offe...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79651162791 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60228167762 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8903956968 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220963506715 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079585667211 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582257936038 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156489540993 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351660368936 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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