You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter
tell them when you will be arriving and leaving
explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost
ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire the quote and facilities available for the weekend stay at your seaside hotel.
We are the group of 4 people planning to visit the Lake point at 31st of October, but we may check-in on 30th October at 4 pm and check-out on 31st October at around 12pm.
Could you please share the price for 1 night stay for both single room and twin sharing room? I would also like to know more about complimentary meals and arrangements.
Although we would arrange some indoor games to play by ourselves, I would like to know some interesting games to pass time or places to visit that can be enjoyed to the hotel nearby. Therefore, could you please let me know about the same? Requesting you to kindly respond swiftly as I am willing to book the staycation immediately.
I am looking forward to here from you soon.
Thank you for your anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Jonas
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66459627329 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6067132367 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.341570477 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27750268208 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104491767995 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450430110455 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136090030331 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560450074797 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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