You and your family had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your as well as your family's feelings about the dinner.
In your letter you should say:
• What you and your family enjoyed at the dinner
• Describe how you and your family feel about his/her family
• Invite your friend and his family to your place
Dear Thomas,
I remember the time when we first met in the premises of university of Toronto. I am grateful to you for helping me at that moment as I was new to the country. I am writing this letter to express my joy over last week’s dinner that you beautifully arranged for me and my family.
There were so many elements about the dinner that I admired a lot. I must say that my parents heartily enjoyed the get together. Your dining hall gave me a very warm and cosy feeling in this freezing weather, specially, the way the room was lightened up with dim yet glittering lights. The atmosphere you managed to create gave us a very homely feeling. The Canadian food was a true delight. The desserts were mouth-watering. Moreover, I no longer feel like a foreigner now because of your loving gesture.
Being an immigrant, we really miss our family parties, as in India we have the culture of mixing up more with our near ones. It was nice on your family’s part to mingle so well with us even on our first meet. They were really supportive of the fact that we belonged to a very different culture. Infact, they seemed very happy to have us over for the dinner. I am greatly over-whelmed with our and respective families friendship.
I won’t say as matter of returning favours, but I and my family genuinely want you to come and join us for the New Year Eve. We will have bonfire, wine with Indian delicacies and not to forget, long sessions of gossips at my place.
I am looking forward for a positive reply of my proposal and eagerly waiting for your response.
Best Wishes
Udita
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat moment as I was new to the country. I am writing this letter to express my jo...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...ents heartily enjoyed the get together. Your dining hall gave me a very warm and cos...
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Line 9, column 324, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...s. The atmosphere you managed to create gave us a very homely feeling. The Canadian ...
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Line 9, column 393, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... The Canadian food was a true delight. The desserts were mouth-watering. Moreover,...
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Line 13, column 414, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...ly over-whelmed with our and respective families friendship. I won't say as ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61450267868 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7418914031 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5263157895 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275735375765 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674849843179 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606089394625 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135835308187 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346530490493 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.