You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school Write a letter to one of your old teacher asking for a reference In your letter say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job sug

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teacher asking for a reference. In your letter:

say what job you have applied for
explain why you want this job
suggest what information the teacher should include

Dear Prof. John,

I am writing to request a reference letter, which is require for applying to my new job.

I was fortunate enough to clear the final round of interview for the position of a Digital marketing assistant at Google. As you know, I have always wanted to work at Google and this is my dream so I really want this job. Also, this position is exactly in alignment with my future plan to become a Digital marketing manager. If I get this role, I will be a step closer to my dream.

However, they need a letter of reference from my tutor mentioning my academic achievements. Since I was your meritorous student and always came first in class, would you be kind enough to mention that on this letter. In addition, please do write about my successful assigments and a personal note of appreciation so that my company will definitely feel that I am a deserving and hard-working candidate. I have to submit this letter by end of this week.

I sincerely appreciate your contribution on my request. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Bina

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...to request a reference letter, which is require for applying to my new job. I was fo...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eciate your contribution on my request. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, as for, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78611515791 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5991340042 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300506282023 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102467765028 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860373254212 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196107505668 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533528157608 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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