you are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems Write a letter to your new employer In your letter explain your situation describe your problems tell him her when you think you can start

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you are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my inability to start my job in your organization. I applied for this job and got selected. I received my joining letter three days ago and it is mentioned there I should join the organization within 15 days after receiving the joining letter. Unfortunately, due to unavoidable circumstances, I am unable to do so.

My grandfather suffered a cardiac arrest. He has been hospitalized, and I am going to take care of him. As I am the only grandson, it is my responsibility to assist him in this difficult time. I will be back only after he recovered properly from this illness.

I am expecting to join the organization by the end of next month as the doctor told me that it will take 14 days to get fully recovered. I would be grateful to you if you allow me to join after the due date considering my situation.
Thanking you for your kind attention.
Yours faithfully,
Kiran.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er the due date considering my situation Thanking you for your kind attention Y...
^^^
Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your kind attention Yours faithfully Kiran
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47904191617 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92365231135 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 167.0 16.3608247423 1021% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 748.0 76.5299724578 977% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 167.0 16.8248392259 993% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223632558669 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223632558669 0.0766984524023 292% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148247989726 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083783385101 0.0580467560999 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 83.2 8.37731958763 993% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -89.57 70.7449484536 -127% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 67.2 7.45979381443 901% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.89 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.76 7.59969072165 194% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 8.62886597938 684% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 68.8 8.54432989691 805% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 8.15463917526 724% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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