You should spend about 20 minutes on this task:
You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
-explain your situation
-describe your problems
-tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Manager,
I am writing with regard about some problems has occurred during these days. I supposed to start working next week, but my Cuban passport must be up-to-date and it is impossible to make arrangements from here.
Also, advice was given to me from Cuban Embassy in Colombia in order to address everything in my home land, If I do not make the passport extension I would loose all rights as a Cuban citizen along with my permanent residence. This is fundamentally essential as working with you. Besides, this would not have happened if have had all travel documents in order. I apologize for this sudden news, I barely noticed it.
I hope you understand my situation I would be extremely grateful If you could await two more weeks for my returning. I am aware the work I applied is highly wanted for other candidates. However, I’ll take responsibility for my future acts during labor work in your Company. Please do not hesitate to contact me for further information. I look forward hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Naile.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to address everything in my home land. If I do not make the passport extension I ...
^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... not make the passport extension I will loose all rights as a Cuban citizen along wit...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'wouldn't' requires base form of this verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...orking with you. Besides, this wouldn’t happened if have had all travel documents in pla...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... await two more weeks for my returning. I am aware the work I applied is highly w...
^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Naile.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75077315227 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696629213483 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7050011921 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205480697418 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070281198534 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596490073695 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120273734225 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400757180527 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.