You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Ann,
I hope you and your family are doing well. As you already know, I'm going to travel to Japan for a year on a scholarship. My plane is scheduled to arrive at Tokyo International Airport on the 15th of August and I couldn't be more excited. My study program consists of six different classes which relate to Finance, The Stock Market and Accounting. I have to attend one session and one workshop every day with the exception of Sunday. I believe I'll have to study for at least three hours each day to pass the final exams.
With that said, I need your help finding a part-time job to cover my personal expenses since the scholarship only covers education and housing fees. So, I'm expected to have some income in order to pay for transport, food, clothing and such.
I'm very skillful at speaking Japanese, French in addition to English as my mother tongue. Maybe you can refer me to all your colleagues or study mates who might need to have books translated from English of French to Japanese. You can also refer me to your boss in case he is interested to hire a part-time interpreter.
I appreciate your help and can't wait to see you when I arrive.
Warm wishes
Mary Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ly are doing well. As you already know, Im going to travel to Japan for a year on ...
^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...nal Airport on the 15th of August and I couldnt be more excited. My study program consi...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... one session and one workshop every day with the exception of Sunday. I believe Ill have to study for...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...with the exception of Sunday. I believe Ill have to study for at least three hours ...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... the exception of Sunday. I believe Ill have to study for at least three hours each ...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to find' or 'find'.
Suggestion: to find; find
...ms. With that said, I need your help finding a part-time job to cover my personal ex...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... covers education and housing fees. So, Im expected to have some income in order t...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... transport, food, clothing and such. Im very skillful at speaking Japanese, Fre...
^^
Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...erpreter. I appreciate your help and cant wait to see you when I arrive. Warm ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49752964367 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4751710167 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3076923077 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27113833672 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904800962894 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086552038149 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168410080165 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344436727954 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.