You are planning to spend a weekend at a hotel with your family. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Include the following:– when you want to arrive and leave– explain the type of rooms you would like and ask how much th

Dear Sir/Madam,

This is with reference to our family's upcoming visit to Miami, and as per our plan we will be looking to stay at your resort. I am writing to clarify few of my queries as well as to inform you about our check in and check out dates.

We will be arriving at your resort on 20th of June 2018 and will check out in the morning of 23rd of June 2018. So in short we will be staying at your hotel for 3 days.

Here, I would like to specify few requirements which we are looking for. Although we are pretty sure to stay at your hotel, I would like to know the room rates for weekends, as I am looking to book 2 double bed rooms. Furthermore, kindly arrange a private phone line which we can use exclusively, in addition to that I am looking for a room which has direct view of the sea shore. Please quote the charges before confirming my reservation.

Finally, please confirm if you can recommend some places of interest as well as sightseeing near to your hotel.

Looking forward to your prompt and positive response.

Yours faithfully.

Fahad

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as to, in addition, in short, as well as, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43434343434 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44227301501 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8800016574 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182262227603 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715485301933 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458028683342 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975399711579 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378871704847 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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