You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
Dear Jack,
How’re you buddy? Actually, through this letter I would like to invite you on a surprise birthday party of my friend Lena.
Although, she was good in study, he fails in last examination. Due to this, she has been surfing from depression state from a long time and wants to stay at home all the day to read books all the time. But the doctors strictly told her to spend some time with friends to feel rejuvenate. Owing to this, I decided to through a party on her birthday to change her mood.
To rejuvenate her I decided to through a surprise party on her birthday. All the arrangements of this party will be hosted by my uncle Wilson at his Hotel Wilson villa near to our institution on 10th Nov. It starts at 10 o’clock and continue till fortnight.
She is found of Indian sweet dish Rice pudding. As you’re are very good cook. You could bring this to feel her jubilant. I hope you will also enjoy this party.
Best regards,
Aman
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... on her birthday to change her mood. To rejuvenate her I decided to through a...
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Suggestion:
...os;clock and continue till fortnight. She is found of Indian sweet dish Rice p...
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Suggestion:
...oy this party. Best regards, Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64204545455 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47359505996 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1623058843 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3571428571 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222383783267 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786598749989 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647099511988 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147497213888 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435566080867 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.