You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mr Chris,

I am writing this letter to request for two weeks off in order to give final exams for my certificate in Oracle Financials.

Let me explain this in more detail. I am doing specialization is Oracle financials and now its time for the final examination and thesis submission. Unfortunately, exams are held in another city which would be difficult to accommodate my work. For this reason, I humbly request 2 weeks off from 15th of April till 30th April.

I make sure on returning, I will complete all my pending work from these weeks, even if it requires me to sit late hours. John will be handling all my duties so I will also be meeting him in order to catch up on anything I had missed.

Recently, our company has implemented Oracle throughout the departments. My certification in Oracle specialization would not only lighten the burden on our accountants but it will also prepare me to be a replacement for any absent employees working with Oracle.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Ahsan Abid.

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81767955801 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91288616893 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9469544159 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2727272727 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201299818879 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666136922316 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427502640385 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102677286402 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338484542755 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.