Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree?
Cost of research and treatment for diseases are higher than to put certain measures for its prevention. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement as putting system to prevent diseases would not be enough to mitigate them entirely and in most developing countries the prevention costs are higher than the cost on research and treatment procedures.
A good reason to use our resources into research and treatment is because most measures to avoid diseases are not enough. As there is always a human error present in all the procedures. In other words, the scale of prevention measures is limitless as a small mistake can become a source for any fatal disease. For instance, neglecting proper disposal of tires may provide environment for dengue mosquitoes to lay eggs and multiply.
Another reason to go ahead with research and treatment is that in almost all developing countries, the cost of putting systems for disease prevention crosses the cost of research and treatment. It is because huge portion of population is living under the poverty line and this makes them more disposed to diseases as they don’t have enough financial aid to put precautions to avoid diseases. And if the state starts investing to put measures in such areas then it will require a huge chunk of budget or they can invest lesser than that to research and treatment of such diseases.
In conclusion, the expenses occurred on research and treatment for diseases is not only beneficial for being prepared for them but it also helps in supporting the places where implication of prevention measures is hard.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sures to avoid diseases are not enough. As there is always a human error present i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04528301887 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.734810473 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535849056604 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1066840938 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.7 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163057202963 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699770409019 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054864600632 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112864734691 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440796036817 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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