Some people say it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that appearance can explain a lot about the nature and history of that person. Although outfits can show a lot about a person, I am of the opinion that looks never identifies the personality.

There are a number of supporting points associated with the idea that a person's outlook can reflect their personality and nature. First of all, there is a different style of clothing which belongs to specific cultures. Culture-based outfits are easily recognized by others as their culture is famous for it. For instance, people who wear big hats with long shoes mostly belong to cowboy culture in areas like Texas, so their appearance represent their culture. Secondly, some people wear their profession influenced clothes which shows their nature as well. It is often seen that people with flashy outfits are mostly in showbiz profession and then people wearing over formal clothes are mostly army personals.

However, taking the choice of dress as the only measurement of someone's character would be unreasonable. Firstly, sometimes clothes are dependent on certain situations. People who are working in a corporate environment mostly carries formal looks which are required by their profession regardless of their personal liking or character reflection. In addition, there are certain occasions which require a specific dress code. For example, people on funerals wear black dresses, it does not represent any culture or preferences of anyone but it only shows that a person is following common rules for a certain occasion. Thus, it is extremely unreasonable to judge someone's culture or character on their appearance as there are a lot of other criteria to be considered as well.

In conclusion, while there are some grounds on which culture and character can be assessed by someone's outfit that is when someone is wearing a very special culture related outfit or they wear their clothes according to their professions. I believe the appearance will give an incomplete judgment on someone's culture or character as they might be wearing it for a particular event or it is required by their work.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17151162791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77267527198 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0072717114 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242452694729 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866449192566 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483890682066 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156368623148 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174053641822 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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