Being a celebrity-such as famous film stars or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or problems?
Certain advantages and issues are always attached to being a popular movie actor or sports person. In my view, problems outweigh the benefits as celebrities cannot enjoy a private life and they usually face a lot of criticism.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits for popular personalities which includes a lot of earnings. They become rich by doing endorsements to products and getting into expensive contracts with companies. They definitely earn way more than even some respectable professionals like doctors and engineers. Moreover, the most desirable advantage of being a part of this community is being famous. A lot of people join movies or sports to only become popular. For instance, it is often reported that people who fail to gain popularity are more inclined to leave even if they are earning well.
Nevertheless, despite the positive aspects explained above, I believe celebrities face serious problems as being famous. Firstly, there is little to zero privacy for such people. Their things from daily routines to major changes in life are public property. There is always media running behind them which publishes everything on the internet which in minutes, spreads like a fire. Secondly, they cannot live a normal life anymore as merely walking around the streets or going for dinner at a restaurant becomes a disastrous event. In other words, celebrities cannot enjoy being alone anywhere as there are always fans or press following them. These issues can sometimes isolate celebrities and most probably frustrated about not enjoying anything of a normal personal life.
In conclusion, interference in the life of celebrities and the lack of living a normal life easily outnumbers the minor benefits of being in such professions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, even so, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29642857143 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78964694935 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7510557232 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251910885203 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774895482333 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695354677184 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162832748634 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316539045073 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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