Being a celebrity- Such as famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is an established fact renowned personality such as sports or movie stars enjoy life full of glamour, adventure and fame but their personal lives remain vulnerable to public introspection and criticism. In my opinion, I believe that being a public figure has number of merits but it also brings some demerits to a person’s family life.
Firstly, being a celebrity is not less than an honor as it gives one privilege to enter into the pool of world’s most powerful people. Celebrities have huge fan following which makes them strong enough to influence plethora of their followers’ worldwide. For Instance, Imran Khan was a famous cricketer back in 1990’s and helped Pakistan in securing world cup 1992 it was the fame he accumulated being a sports personality that today people of Pakistan have made him President of the state. But Imran's personal life has always been under radar especially political opponents have exploited to tarnish his reputation. Additionally, expensive brands such as Zara, Nike, MC, CK and many others prefer to sign famous people as their brand ambassadors due to their influential personalities. As a result, they receive large sums of remunerations, perks and privileges for only associating brands with their name. For example, Katrina Kaif a Bollywood actor remained brand ambassador for VEET cream for almost five years, this helped brand reaping millions of rupees in sales.
On the other hand, celebrities are always on the verge of being exploited one such example is the case of famous Pakistani cricketer Muhammad Saeed who was convicted of ball tempering case and was banned for 3 years from both locally and international cricket. Such defamation cost them greatly sometimes through public criticism, court trials, ban, or imprisonment along with huge financial blow.
To sum it up, a celebrity should remember that he was once a common man and should not disappoint millions of people his followers. They should keep their dignity and integrity intact at all times and never indulges into suspicious activities or acts that are against the norms of a civilized society.
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...d reaping millions of rupees in sales. On the other hand, celebrities are alway...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23255813953 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88003210238 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642441860465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8473684042 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.461538462 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167679435547 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540082003179 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383840723513 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933984688279 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404257891569 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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