In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
Restriction for teenagers on going out after a particular time without any guardian has been implemented in some places of America. In my opinion, this is a positive development for both teenagers and parents.
First of all, with this restriction, parents will feel more sure about their children. Criminal activities mostly happen in the night time because stealth is more effective in the dark which can make any crime easier than in the morning. Moreover, teenagers in the night time are vulnerable as they are not mature enough to keep them safe from all the threats. It is often reported that children mostly from teenage are targeted for kidnapping while they are out in the night.
Secondly, teenagers will have extra time to focus on their studies. Most of the teenage activities are at night time such as parties and friend meetings. By this restriction, they will have plenty of time in the house which can be utilized in improving their grades or any productive activity for their education. For example, top students are mostly those teenagers who are restricted to go out so they can spend more time in their studies.
Finally, following this curfew will bring discipline in a teenagers life. Nowadays, children are considered as more spoiled than in the past because of unlimited freedom. By implementing time curfew, teenagers will learn the value of time and how it can be spent in a productive way. This discipline will become a part of their lifestyle and It will not only be a positive change for themselves but for all their generations to come.
In conclusion, the significance of this time restriction will bring a lot of positive changes in teenagers such as the abundance of time for studies and learning to follow rules. In the case of parents, this rule will provide them a sense of security as their children will not be out at night without their supervision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ongoing
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90062111801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68931906255 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493788819876 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5816282589 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225256929074 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928410252109 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041865524715 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149919317924 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239499366293 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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