Lost an item in your trip. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company
- Describe the item
- How you lost it
- What you want them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to claim my travel insurance regarding a bag which I lost on my recent trip to London. My insurance number is KLM34875.
I was coming back to Toronto, as the flight got delayed and I was starving so I went to eat something from this restaurant. I kept my bag on a chair where I was sitting. While I was eating, a sudden announcement for my flight came up and it was the last one to call all the passengers to board the flight. As a thought of losing my flight, I ran from there to my gate and boarded the plane. Later on, I discovered that I had left my bag in the restaurant.
The color of my bag is dark brown with prominent white stitching on all its borders. It has personalized engraving of my name at the back. It is in an okay condition with some rough patch on edges. You will find my visiting cards and some papers related to budgeting and portfolios of companies.
Could you please check the lost and found department of that restaurant? If it is not there then I would appreciate a claim on it as it covered in my insurance. I would say, it would cost me around 100$ to buy a replacement. I would really appreciate if you could contact me with a solution as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help.
Yours faithfully,
Ahsan Abid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ondon. My insurance number is KLM34875. I was coming back to Toronto, as the fli...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100'.
Suggestion: $100
...e. I would say, it would cost me around 100$ to buy a replacement. I would really ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32510288066 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6631460782 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572016460905 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6808260701 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8235294118 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11861815276 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460533538088 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615029772556 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910588372887 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695987982995 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.