You are unable to attend your friend’s wedding in Britain. In this letter
- Tell her what you think about her wedding plan
- Apologize for not attending
- Suggest a date for a future meeting
Dear Unni,
It was such a pleasant surprise for me when I received your wedding card today morning. Unfortunately, I shall not be able to attend the wedding as my parent’s silver jubilee falls on the same day and, I have planned a surprise for them here on that day.
I have read from the letter than you are planning to organise a simple wedding function and is planning to support another wedding of a needy low-income family on that same day. I know how generous you are in your life. You always do things in a novel way and, I’m sure that this will inspire the new generation.
I’m really sorry that I shall not be able to attend your wedding; I have a suggestion. Why don’t you plan your honeymoon in India? The backwater in Kerala is the right choice for honeymooners, and you can spend a few days with me as well. Please consider this proposal.
I wish you a very long and happy married life. Hope to see you soon.
Yours lovingly
Rahul
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...or me when I received your wedding card today morning. Unfortunately, I shall not be able to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a novel way" with adverb for "novel"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... are in your life. You always do things in a novel way and, I’m sure that this will inspire th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42937853107 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44057333946 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4966962263 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313067047702 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103021185267 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395049058604 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176738682964 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432621346928 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.