You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.
1. explain where you live
2. describe the problem
3. give reasons why you do not want this development
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to show dissatisfaction over the state government's decision to implement large-scale changes to the janakpur airport and turn it into one of the central hubs for air transportation in the region. Personally, I believe this will do more harm than good.
I am a native of janakpur and I am located within 3 miles of this airport. In fact the runway is visible from the roof of my house and looking at the take-offs and landings in the morning and evening has become a routine activity.
You are already aware that this airport lies in a protected area and making any plans for its extension will result into substantial removal of vegetation. Moreover,the surrounding forest area has a rich biodiversity with some unique flora and fauna. In fact, it is the only habitat of some extinct animal species like Panda in Nepal.
Enlarging the infrastructure and upscaling the facilities is not recommendable because the works will endanger the future of many species. Moreover, the tribal community who dwell in the lush green forest will be displaced. What's more, the monuments in the city will have to face the pollution from the increased number of vehicles transiting to the airport everyday once the plan goes ahead and changes are made.
I hope you will publish an editorial on the subject and appreciate my concern.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ram
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83382348701 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4267487041 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147552592729 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513516634296 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541635201005 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713846599606 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377547223004 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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