you borrowed some books from your school/college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am traveling to visit my grandmother who is very ill and I would not return the book which I borrowed in time as promised. My sincere apologies for this, the situation is not within my control and this visit is one I must make as these may be the last days of my grand mother's life.
Let me explain my situation. My grandmother served as a second mother to me while I was growing up because my mother worked a lot. As a result, my grandmother and I are very close. Late last year, she was diagnosed with a heart condition. Being 80 years old, the doctors told us that she is unlikely to live through the sickness. This is why when I received a call from my mother informing me that she is now in a critical condition in the hospital. I had to travel to see her.
I have given the book that I borrowed to my roommate, Linda Okoro. She will return it to the library on my behalf. she has similar features to mine with brown skin, long hair and brown eyes. I have enclosed a photocopy of her student identification card for further clarification.
Thank you
Yours Faithfully,
Nlebemuo Jessica.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... return it to the library on my behalf. she has similar features to mine with brown...
^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for further clarification. Thank you Yours Faithfully, Nlebemuo Jessica.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, while, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34403669725 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60567013946 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4850926647 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6428571429 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110729390706 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425161414597 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565057509427 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724249676545 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417962435156 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.