You bought a ticket to music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Tell your friend the details about the concert.
Explain why you are unable to go.
and explain how your friend could receive your ticket
Dear Kareem,
It`s been so long since we met last month. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to offer you a ticket for a music concert which I won`t be able to attend.
My wife and I are amazed with life music concerts where one will be shown life in our city week. When I decided to book a concert, I could not have chosen better than the musician Omar Khiry. The concert will start on Monday at 9:00 PM in the main Opera hall, but you must arrive early for the check-in arrangement and security checks.
I booked the ticket early this month, and I did not expect that I will be out of the country on the concert`s day. My company has just signed a contract with an important client where in China, and I have been selected in the team who will travel to Beijing to negotiate the terms and conditions. I will be unavailable in the country for a complete month starting from this Friday.
It is so tight for me to do all travel arrangement; therefore, I left the ticket with my next-door neighbor Mr. Essam. You can pass by and ask him directly for it, but it would be better to come afternoon after his work duties are over.
Warm wishes,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39910313901 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36112175374 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6610663172 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171095551818 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593089467633 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752579275197 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11043852443 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748796212729 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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